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Re: The Nature of Justice
Wow! I didn't think it would be that well liked. Thanks everyone--especially Flower Child, because I know how hard it is for her to sincerely compliment me on anything. :) ...
Aug 2, 2010 -
Re: The Nature of Justice
Okay, so summer requirements for 11th grade Advanced Placement English class required that I write an essay in story form, an essay describing an incident that made me reevaluate my ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Oh how I hate the stars
This poem was both sad and amusing in its own special way. I'm afraid it doesn't evoke much sympathy in me, as I love the stars and am a total ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Three Letters
Haha. How quaint! Short and sweet; I liked it. The thing is, if you were dying and you pulled your lover close and whispered "I...L...Y" it's quite possible they might ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: Child Soldier
Look into the eyes of innocence, Staring down the barrel of the gun. Fear and hunger in every tear, Broken windows to the soul, Shaking hands, soft and small, Smeared ...
Jul 18, 2010 -
Re: cube
I am fully aware that the poem makes little sense and lacks capitalization and punctuation, so you needn't inform me of the fact. I intended it to be exactly as ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: Hero
Thank you, everyone! I'm psyched that you liked my poem. I realize the syllables get a little unmanageable here and there, but you know, such is life. To LavenderBlue: a ...
Jul 15, 2010 -
Re: What is a hair without a head?
Haha!! I liked this. It was witty and imaginative, and I think it's sweet that you wrote it for your grandparents, of all people. I mean, nobody seems to do ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Searching
Okay. All of this was good EXCEPT the word "nice." It almost made me groan. It just doesn't fit, and mars the serious tone. Surely you can think of some ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Wings of Concrete
Whoa. This is...good. I absolutely love the title. It is very evocative, and makes me think of a statue of a fallen angel lost amid the skyscrapers of a city. ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Roses Are Red
Haha! This poem made me smile, despite the fact that it is rather sad. It was light, cute, and slightly cheeky; it reminded me of Owl City's songs. You might ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Art
Hey! Street art is art too, thank you very much! Haha. I liked this poem. It was a bit bland, rather obvious, but definitely full of truth. I would've preferred ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Lightning
Well, brief, first of all. It wasn't exactly pure genius, but it was good. Is he so sure anger doesn't make noise? When I'm angry I make a WHOLE lot ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: The Wandering
Well, congratulations, love. You have successfully earned my admiration. I could feel the pain and despair in this poem. The format was very untraditional, but I think that helped rather ...
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: There's no such thing as a perfect moment
Um...okay. This was definitely what diplomats such as myself like to call an "indie" poem. Very...*cough*...unusual. I am of the opinion that there IS such a thing as a perfect ...
Jul 14, 2010
